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- Gemma, I have thoroughly enjoyed looking over your blog and reading your posts. You are clearly really interested in the topic, and this really shines through in your work.
- Many of your posts are excellent, I really like to overall 'visual look' of your blog, there's lots of technical skill shown in that things are moving, you have gone to the effort of creating your own videos of audience views, mood board collages, etc. - All great!
- Great to finally read a blog with all theory posts completed - I hope that your understanding of these will help shape your ideas for the music video
EBI:
- Post 13 - Mood board video montage is great - needs a paragraph included underneath where you explain how / why the artists you have shown represent themselves in this way
- Post 15 - Genre research - conventions - I couldn't find this?? It should be a big, visual and creative posts?
- Post 18 - Advert research?? Still to do?
Overall effort - VG (Very Good) - So very close to 'Excellent' Gemma, and certainly will be when done. Please make sure you have all Research posts completed by this Friday Oct 7th for Final assessment.
Thank you for investing so much effort into your blog, again, I have really enjoyed reading through your work.
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